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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:32 am    Post subject: say, what about saying good night? Reply with quote

would it violate the morning improv byrules to add a couple transititon panels (p. 9)? I felt the couple page build-up to dropping her awf at tha sheltah CUT TO him walking off with hisself's shadow figure to be anti-climactic to say the least. I'm not asking to see the spirit of the story violated in any way with a parting kiss and fireworks in the air. But where's the "welp, gotta find me a nice box to cozy up with. mebbe I'll see you awrond when I bring father back his coat, huh?" I'm in agreeance with the priest in thinking that he'll be back... so goodbyes aren't neccessary perse, but c'mon scott please: i'm dying to hear them twak it out straight up honestly a little more intimately.
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