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The easiest way for a city to go from good to bad is some sort of devastation. One of your heroes going bad and destroying something important like a power plant. A major event like a meteor or terrorist attack might not even have to devastate much, but just enough to get people paranoid and start a...

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Absolutely, I would think the older generation would even want to keep the serum away from most people because they're creating an obedient society of workers and warriors. A selfish society, it depends, it can go the way it'll best serve your story. Sometimes criminals figure out that constantly st...

Sometimes the simplest reasons are the most complex. A superiority complex/inteligence could drive a culture to isolation (consider the Chinese in real life centuries ago), but remember that choosing that path has a ripple effect on the culture. That sense of isolation would permeate through most ci...

The "Ghetto" city could've started to reject the serum, wanting to return to being "normal" but that transition hasn't been easy. Or perhaps, just physically, the people can't use the serum anymore. Maybe they needed a new version, couldn't come up with it, and now things are going bad. Who controls...

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Hi, my name is Ruben R. Diaz and I've been a professional writer in a variety of capacities for 15 years. Most recently I have written several award-winning short films, plays, and scripts which I'd like to see created as comics books. Examples of my writing work can be watched at the following link...

I'm always up for a chat about the craft and to help shape ideas into stories.