Looking for Kickstarter Feedback

[LeoSnart]

Hello All,

I'm launching my kickstarter for my comic Lonesomes (Pokemon meets I Kill Giants) next week and would love feedback on the page.

You can check it out here: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/11 ... n=3aad22fe

I'd love any insights/feedback you might be willing to share. Thanks for the help!