Cameo- A short comic experiment. Critiques welcome!

Robin · Post by **Robin** » Mon Apr 10, 2006 11:37 pm

A while back I did a short comic that I intended to be a bit of an explorative thing. I experimented with a sort of dual-storytelling method by running parallel panels that are meant to be occuring in tandum. I don't think it would work very well for a long comic, but for a short comic...well, I could use some thoughts. Cameo can be found here. What do you guys think? Does it work? Is it too unclear or confusing? Do you like what it does?

Tim Tylor · Post by **Tim Tylor** » Wed Apr 12, 2006 4:17 am

It's clear enough for me, and I love the style and layout.

Pumpkin Pie · Post by **Pumpkin Pie** » Thu Apr 13, 2006 10:17 am

I like it. The silhouettes tell a unique spin on the story. Very interesting. Not sure why their eyes are black holes though.

Robin · Post by **Robin** » Thu Apr 13, 2006 5:20 pm

It has to do with what their eyes are seeing.