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I am looking for someone who can help me write and also with whom I can share ideas. I am working on a piece called Debitum which takes place in the dwarf galaxy of Sagittarius. If you are interested please email me at: austinmulka@gmail.com answering the following questions.

-Why are you interested in being a co-writer?
-What unique skills do you have apart from all the other writers?
-What is your favorite style of writing? (Anime, Sci Fi?)
- Kirk or Picard?

In addition, please attach a writing sample in word or RTF format

A degree in English and a general knowledge of theoretical (sci fi) physics would be preferred but I'm willing to give anyone a shot.

Sample of work:

PAGE 1 Introduction: Taking place in 2215 A.D. In the small galaxy of Sagittarius Elliptical. PANEL 1 Caption 1: Planet Debitume, 2215 A.D. Narration 1: This is Debitum, or what remains of it. Narration 2: It was not always like this, the planet, my planet, once flourished with life. Debitum stood proudly as a symbol of peace and justice to the universe. PANEL 2: Narration 1: Debitum was a confederacy, its power was shared equally among sovereign territories. Order was established by means of small militias throughout the planet. Narration 2: That all changed when the assorted militias formed an army. Mislead by the castigations of Commander Ag, the soldiers declared totalitarian rule over their people. PANEL 3: Narration 1: Myself, I am Lux, defender of the galaxy, a member of the Sagittarius Defense Core. (SDC) Narration 2: We were called many names: gods, guardians, protectors, but in reality, we were dictators and tyrants.
PAGE 5
...Caption 1: Sagittarius Galaxy of Defense - 2200 A.D.
SDC Director: If I could have your attention, I would like to move on to new business, starting with the newly gathered intelligence on the third planet of the Milky-way galaxy. Cera: Sir, ‘Earth’ is making advancements at the quantum level, they have recently figured out the constant at the subatomic level is other than the speed of light. PANEL 2 SDC Director: What is their status regarding negative energy? Cera: They still believe particles can spontaneously appear from nothing, no advancements on the physics of particles in warp drive; nor how to replicate the effect at the macro level. PANEL 3 SDC Director: Well then, I see no reason to worry. Shall we move on to concerns?

Is this a story or a comic? If it is a written word story this is kinda the wrong place for it.

HIs sample is a script - he just didn't format it right so it came out as a wall of text.

Always check your formatting when you C&P something.

I just copied and pasted it from my script program and it didn't format correctly. Sorry about that.

PAGE 1
Introduction: Taking place in 2250 A.D. In the small galaxy of Sagittarius Elliptical.
PANEL 1

Narration 1: This is Debitum, or what remains of it.
Narration 2: It was not always like this, the planet, my planet, once flourished with life. Debitum stood proudly as a symbol of peace and justice to the universe.

PANEL 2:

Narration 1: Debitum was a confederacy, its power was shared equally among sovereign territories. Order was established by means of small militias throughout the planet.
Narration 2: That all changed when the assorted militias formed an army. Mislead by the castigation of Commander Ag, the soldiers declared totalitarian rule over their people.

PANEL 3:

Narration 1: Myself, I am Lux, defender of the galaxy, a member of the Sagittarius Defense Core. (SDC)
Narration 2: We were called many names: gods, guardians,protectors, but in reality, we were dictators and tyrants.

_____________________________________________________________

PAGE 5




PANEL 1
...Caption 1: Sagittarius Galaxy of Defense - 2200 A.D.

SDC Director: If I could have your attention, I would like to move on to new business, starting with the newly gathered intelligence on the third planet of the Milky-way galaxy.

Cera: Sir, ‘Earth’ is making advancements at the quantum level, they have recently figured out the constant at the subatomic level is other than the speed of light.
PANEL 2
SDC Director: What is their status regarding negative energy?

Cera: They still believe particles can spontaneously appear from nothing, no advancements on the physics of particles in warp drive; nor how to replicate the effect at the macro level.
PANEL 3
SDC Director: Well then, I see no reason to worry. Shall we move on to concerns?


The tabs are still not formatted correctly but close enough.

So, you have your dialog, but no cues in there? Is that what you need help with?

Just help in general :D

Are you looking for writing samples based on your subject, our just a general sample?

Just a general sample attesting to your writing ability. I will need help with the following:

-Scene descriptions. (I omitted the scene descriptions in the above script for easy reading, however, I do have scene descriptions for most of the panels.)

-Character descriptions.

-brainstorming, plot ideas.

if your still looking for help you can send me and email

jcqantihero@gmail.com