Volatile (5 Pages). Looking for feedback.

SkyfireQT · Post by **SkyfireQT** » Sun Nov 03, 2013 12:36 pm

Hello there! I'm a new aspiring script-writer... i'm sharing 5 pages of an idea i've been tinkering with! Any feedback is highly appreciated. Thanks!!

I would recommend reading the script from this link to my dropbox, it's a PDF file that you can read with no need of downloading. Reason being the format is easier to read. I tried posting a version on the thread but it's too long for the forum to take it!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9juati810c2li ... ges%29.pdf

katebishophawkeye · Post by **katebishophawkeye** » Sun Nov 03, 2013 8:55 pm

Hey!

I've taken a quick look at your script, and it seems really cool. If you PM me for me email and send me the script in a word document, I can do some proper edits if you'd like.

Cheers,
Tiffany

SkyfireQT · Post by **SkyfireQT** » Mon Nov 04, 2013 11:22 am

Will do, Thanks so much