Ultima Thule Episode I: The First Attempt!

[Rephaim.Noir]

Just finished the final touches to my first ever comic last night. Please check it out:

http://rephaimnoir.deviantart.com/

admittedly it has a long way to go. My drawing style is developing at best and I really need to learn how to either do computer art or scan thing in but I'm pretty pleased with the writing and plot (although some of the earlier ones could be improved)

Any advice is welcome as well as anyone who is interested in colaberating to make it a more finished peice. I have plenty more ideas and places to go and am happy to share ideas with anyone who is interested.

Thank you for reading this and hope you like!

Rephaim