Advice

Iceclaw · Post by **Iceclaw** » Wed Nov 26, 2014 9:51 pm

Hey new writer here I say the advice topic and read the great advice others were giving out. But I would be very grateful for some personal pointers. I have 7 pages of my script I am working on but before I continue I want to know if I am on the right track. If anybody here has the time to look at an amateurs work just put down your email and I will send you what I have. I'll take the constructive criticism and advice you give about my descriptions or my writing in general. Thanks you for your time in advance.

mazzasgotjazz · Post by **mazzasgotjazz** » Thu Nov 27, 2014 2:32 am

I would love to take a look at your work. I will admit that I have high standards, especially when it comes to dialogue.

My email is: cianmcgrath99@gamil.com

Just for any others who look at this thread, I would like to recommend Saga by Brian K Vaughan. I of course know how popular it is, so nearly everyone here more than likely knows Brian and Saga, but I can't recommend it enough. Amazingly brilliant dialogue.

Iceclaw · Post by **Iceclaw** » Thu Nov 27, 2014 4:02 am

I seem to be having trouble connecting to your email can you send a a random message to this email:

Jayfeather25@gmail.com

mazzasgotjazz · Post by **mazzasgotjazz** » Thu Nov 27, 2014 9:07 am

My apologies.

cianmcgrath99@gmail.com