I wrote this comic panel about a hero who can walk on wall, but I don't know if I communicated this panel correctly, I was hoping if anyone could help me out by drawing it so i can see what others see when they read my descriptions.
I'm not asking for a full render just 2 stick figures of there positions will be fine. I'll post what I was see in my head a little later don't want to influence your version. Here's the panel.
Side shot of beetle(guy in a suit) standing on the side wall of the building connect to the one Naomi is on his head is just above Naomi's as shes inches away from beetle face looking into he's eyes.
looking for writer and artist input
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here is the link to the pic I'm trying to depict. If you have a better why of depicting this shot I'd love to here it thanks
http://imgur.com/w3biuYq
http://imgur.com/w3biuYq
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It really depends on the rest of the page and what the story calls for, if you have already established, that beetle is on the wall, and naomi is on the ground, you could always just have a close up shot of just their heads. But if the story calls for a dramatic shot, such as naomi is surprised to see beetle standing on the wall, you might have to go for a different shot, rather than just what you drew. Best describe the whole page.
ok this is the whole page if it helps
Shot of Naomi, hands folded, head tilted to the side looking at beetle with a upset look on her face.
NAOMI RHODES
Is that really all your going to give me?
THE BEETLE
(Off Panel)
Let's just say its hard to explain.
NAOMI RHODES
Ya I bet.
Shot of both beetle and Naomi looking at each other. Beetle is rubbing the back his head and Naomi is talking with her hands. Rock and Roll are fighting each other right above there heads.
NAOMI RHODES
Well what about powers got any?
THE BEETLE
Ya super everything.
NAOMI RHODES
Really?
THE BEETLE
No joke.
Shot of beetle flipping on to the side of the building that is connected to the warehouse, as Naomi watches. Rock and Roll are still fighting just above Naomi's head.
THE BEETLE
Oh I can walk on walls too.
NAOMI RHODES
Walls.
THE BEETLE
I'll show you.
Shot of Naomi looking at beetle who is look at beetle stands on the side of the wall like it was the ground. Rock and Roll are still fighting.
NAOMI RHODES
OK that's cool I'm glad gravity has no bearing on you.
Shot of Naomi's legs as she walks closer to the wall where beetle is.
THE BEETLE
I'm not defying gravity I'm just using my strength to fight it.
THE BEETLE
It's easy when you get use to it.
Side shot of beetle standing on the side wall of the building connect to the one Naomi is on his head is just above Naomi's as shes inches away from beetle face looking into he's eyes.
THE BEETLE
But in the be--
NAOMI RHODES
Why...do you fight for us.
THE BEETLE
Why.
Shot of Naomi, hands folded, head tilted to the side looking at beetle with a upset look on her face.
NAOMI RHODES
Is that really all your going to give me?
THE BEETLE
(Off Panel)
Let's just say its hard to explain.
NAOMI RHODES
Ya I bet.
Shot of both beetle and Naomi looking at each other. Beetle is rubbing the back his head and Naomi is talking with her hands. Rock and Roll are fighting each other right above there heads.
NAOMI RHODES
Well what about powers got any?
THE BEETLE
Ya super everything.
NAOMI RHODES
Really?
THE BEETLE
No joke.
Shot of beetle flipping on to the side of the building that is connected to the warehouse, as Naomi watches. Rock and Roll are still fighting just above Naomi's head.
THE BEETLE
Oh I can walk on walls too.
NAOMI RHODES
Walls.
THE BEETLE
I'll show you.
Shot of Naomi looking at beetle who is look at beetle stands on the side of the wall like it was the ground. Rock and Roll are still fighting.
NAOMI RHODES
OK that's cool I'm glad gravity has no bearing on you.
Shot of Naomi's legs as she walks closer to the wall where beetle is.
THE BEETLE
I'm not defying gravity I'm just using my strength to fight it.
THE BEETLE
It's easy when you get use to it.
Side shot of beetle standing on the side wall of the building connect to the one Naomi is on his head is just above Naomi's as shes inches away from beetle face looking into he's eyes.
THE BEETLE
But in the be--
NAOMI RHODES
Why...do you fight for us.
THE BEETLE
Why.