Twisted luck part 2. what you think

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Hey everyone this is part 2 injoy and tell me what you think.

Twisted luck part 2

While driving along we finally came to a stop. We arrived at a farm, me and Eric was still asleep so we didn?t know where we were. I ask Jermaine

Ricky: ? hey what?s up where the heck are we.?

Jermaine said that

Jermaine: ? We just stop here to pick up some food and gas. I stop here a lot so I know the guy here. By the way, where you guys headed.?

Ricky: ? oh yea, well we don?t really know, see where on the run from some guy?

Jermaine: ?who??

Ricky: ?Victor?

Jermaine: ?You mean the owner of Victors casino?

Ricky: ?Yes, why you know him.?

Jermine: I used to perform there, first I started as a prize fighter then I got much better and more into it, so I went on to bigger things. I was the heavy weight champion of the world, and I thought I was unbeatable. Then one day I got nock out cold in the fourth round. Since that day I never felt the same, so I retired.

Eric ?Where are we??

As Eric finally wakes up

Ricky: ? About time you woke up.?

Well Jermain got the supplies ready and loaded them into the truck.

Ricky: ? so when are you going to drop us off??

Jermaine ?well I was wondering if I could chill with you guys.?

Ricky: ?You would understand what kind of trouble you?ll be getting your self into right.?

Jermaine: ?I understand, I have something to settle with one of his man.?

Ricky: ?Fine. Lets go.?

We left the farm. It was 11:00pm.

Jermaine: ?So what?s the full story with you gene, don?t you have a car??

Ricky: ?I had a car, a hot car, I called it the bumble bee, but it got total.?

Jermaine: ?Oh that terrible. So where you want me to go.?

Ricky: ?Well where are we?

Jermaine: ?some place named spalden.?

Ricky: ?Did you just say spalden.?

Jermaine: ?Yes, why.?

Ricky: ?Menthus is coming up soon right??

Jermaine: ?As a matter of facts yes there is.? ?why.?

Ricky: ?Make a right turn at the fork in Menthus. At this rate my guess is that we?ll make it around six in the morning.

5:00 AM

Ricky: ?I had a good sleep, do you want me to take the wheel a while so you can take a nap.?

Jermaine: ?Nah, before I pick you guys up I stop at a hotel.?

Ricky: ?ok cool.?

Jermaine: ?So why you want to go to Menthus so bad anyways.?

Ricky: ?I got a friend there that has something for me that might be useful. Do you have a cell phone.?

Jermaine: ?yea, here knock your self out.?

Gene (Ricardo) ?Thanks.?

So I called up a friend name mike, he?s a mechanic, the best around. A while back mike used to work on my car, if it wasn?t for him I would be broke all the time. Mike was always working on new inventions for cars. He said that he has a new invention for me. When I called he answered and told me that I?m very lucky, because he was moving his shop to a more public location. We arrived in Menthus around 6:00am. As we were driving we saw a small shop ahead.

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